Margins Of The Literary Scene
March 17, 2010 in science fiction, short stories, writing
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March 17, 2010 at 10:56 pm
Hahaha, fantastic out-of-left-field ending.
March 17, 2010 at 11:25 pm
I’ve not read through it yet because I don’t want to spoil the ending before I know – is Chase a reoccurring character from another short story?
March 17, 2010 at 11:51 pm
Yes. Not a very good one, though.
March 18, 2010 at 3:44 am
Hehe, I like it. I do admit though, with long pauses between stories I don’t gain much from the the familiar character since even after your link I only remember “veteran, someone trying to kill him.”
Is this the final chapter in the story?
March 18, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Hmmm . . . I’m disappointed with that ending. Unsatisfying man!
Also, I find the line: “The world had changed almost overnight,” pretty funny. Would that idiom survive into the future? Though, I’ll admit, “The solar system changed almost overnight,” sounds a little strange too.
March 24, 2010 at 12:51 am
just putting this out there. You should have the sister blog link to gentlemen of the road up on the top left of your list of links
its good publicitiy i tell ya
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